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I Promise We Will Last

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Today was just another day for me
Another ordinary day to dread
Just one of those days where I sit
And think about everything in my head
Where I don't want to move an inch
Because I'm afraid that I might fall
Since the burden I carry weighs more and more
To the point where I can't even stand tall

But then I saw the face of an angel
And I could've sworn I heard her softly say
"I won't let you die, I'm here to save your life"
So I promised her I wouldn't die today
I couldn't go and hurt her like that
Because I don't want to see an angel cry
And at that moment I knew it was true
That today wouldn't be the day I die

I know angels protect the humans
But this angel has a broken wing
And she can't seem to fly away
She's lost the song that angels sing
But what's worse than not flying home
Is that she's even got a broken heart
So I told her that I'd repair it up
So it would be as good as at the start

And I don't know if she knows that she should
Put her trust in me and let herself believe
That if she gave me her broken heart
I wouldn't break it because I'd never leave
Her like the rest of the people in the world
That have left her broken and lonely in the past
But I don't have the courage to say
"If you give us a chance, I promise we'll last"
I just wrote this on the spot. It's not my best, or my favourite. But, it's for a friend I made today. Or met. Or whatever the word is. I met her on here. And, we are so much alike, it's insane. And, I'm pretty sure she sorta maybe likes me, but I know I really like her, so I wrote this, to show her how I feel. I hope she likes it...
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sundriedbrains's avatar
I love the third stanza. Especially the broken wing stuff. It really brought up the quality, making it a little less prose-y and more poetic... if that makes sense...